Very strong submission. Intro and mid section sound epic and melody progression in those areas is very nice, though sometimes feels like the song could sound more triumphant instead of dark/tense, but really well composed like 0:08-0:12.
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Campana - Tiny Music Jam Submission's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme fit | #30 | 3.800 | 3.800 |
| Enjoyment | #37 | 3.480 | 3.480 |
| Creativity | #45 | 3.640 | 3.640 |
| General Quality | #49 | 3.440 | 3.440 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This could be very good, but I'm confused by a couple of things.
-The mud in the lower part of the spectrum makes it difficult to distinguish between instruments
-The introduction of the snare drum with syncopation at 0:07 sec. (this is very confusing)
-The harmony (this is subjective) But it's still a good job!
It's definitely a good technique, and it sounds good in your work. The only thing that knocked me down was the moment at 0:07 seconds when the snare drum became noticeably louder.
I listened to the beyerdynamic dt 770 pro, but after listening to the Adam T7 monitors, I want to note the wide stereo picture. However, I really can't get rid of the feeling of hum in the mix. Maybe I'm just a fan of the drier sound and just don't understand the genre.
Thank you, I definitely was suffering from ear fatigue making this, I was using a plugin for the first time and found out you can't control dynamics making it muddier since I couldn't adjust each separate note, honestly I don't find the snare very confusing, listening back the harmony is quite boring, I didn't really want to spend a lot of time on it either since it said don't work too hard, haha, I'm currently struggling to learn large orchestral mixing and mastering, it's quite hit or miss for me, and also trying to find out what VSTs actually work for me, thanks again for the input.


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