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Interesting concept, but when the conflict happened I was a little worn out by the constant clicking. I played on a PC and the "click-to-type-then-click-to-send" was bothersome.
One feature that would improve the story would be showing Alyssa's texts with fewer clicks. A click should show all her texts until someone intervenes.
Anyways, a hero chatgroup seems like a nice idea. I wish Alyssa's involvement with the group had more weight to it, maybe the group is stuck with her, maybe she knows the secret identity of one of them... not my story, I get it. But It feels Alyssa joined them just because.
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Congrats on finishing your story!
Thank you so much for playing and for your thoughtful feedback! I'm always looking for ways to improve gameplay!
Alyssa actually does know the secret identities of all of the team members because Layna/Yieldstrike accidentally revealed them to her. If you decide to give the game another go and stick around until the end, Alyssa's goals might become a bit clearer ;)
That said, it is helpful to know what I can improve in terms of clarity in the story, and I will keep this in mind for future updates!
Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts!
I guess I could have expressed myself better.
In my previous comment I started giving ideas for your story. I realized I shouldn't be doing it, so I tried to play it smart and stopped myself mid-sentence, but it sounded like I was saying "wouldn't it be nice if you did the thing you already did?", My bad.
Anyways, ignore my story feedbacks, and please consider the gameplay feedbacks. The mouse activity was taking me away from the story.
cheers
No worries! Thanks again for your feedback!
Hi! I wanted to share that I have updated the game to allow players to progress the story using "Enter"/"return" keys. I hope this helps make gameplay smoother!