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A jam submission

A Poem for the King 2: A Poem for the QueenView game page

Write short poems, no skill needed
Submitted by Val Hutchins — 21 hours, 21 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Authenticity (or, Creativity in use of resolution)#763.7143.714
Gameplay#812.5712.571
Overall#862.6432.643
Audio#892.0002.000
Graphics#952.2862.286

Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Themes
I used the theme "The player is replaced by AI" as them story to my game.

Team
Alone

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

I won immediately, not sure what the basis for a good poem is other than one I think is nice haha

Submitted(+1)

Very original! The music quite captures the poet’s aggravation for being replaced.

Submitted(+1)

At each restart, a new instance of the music started playing, eventually there was like a dozen of them running. (me being a fan of like Ministry and Einsturzende Neubauten and all, I’m actually quite ok with this). Chrome on Linux.

Developer

Thanks for letting me know. I have only run it on windows and have not had the issue, but I will work on trying to figure out what is going wrong with the sound.

HostSubmitted

It's interesting. Is there more points for lines matching somewhat the theme of previous lines or is it judged based on just the current line itself? I was working under the latter assumptions and it was easy enough to boil the lines down: "broken", "makes no sense", "that's aight". :)

Developer

For this it is based on the current line and not the previous. I would like to explore the idea more with longer poems (outside of the jam without the pixel limitations) where you could build one line to the next trying to have some consistency in theme. It would be fun to explore that and possibly provide more choice in switching out specific words or directing where the poem might go thematically.

Submitted

I got a few the queen sort of liked, but didn't manage to win. It was sort of hard to know how to play :) 

Developer

I get that, I just go with poems are subjective so it is hard to really know what the queen likes. Thanks for playing.

Submitted

Interesting concept! I didn’t really understand what makes one line of poetry better than another, or how the verses are ranked. Then again, I’m not a native English speaker, so maybe the whole idea just went over my head.

Developer

I have a set of rules that judges them, but ultimately, it is kind of both subjective and random what actually makes a good poem. The queen has her system, but it doesn't always match perfectly with what I think is good and bad.

Submitted(+1)

Interesting concept. I'm not really sure what I'm doing to win, but I thought it was interesting to generate different poems. Nice job!

Developer

Ultimately the score comes down to 

0 - Pts for a poem that has a bug in it (some error message or unspecified words)

1 - Pt for a poem that doesn't fit a theme

3 - Pts for a poem where the words "match a theme" (animal, nature,...)

But it can be hard to tell if they match or not and sometimes those that don't match can be more intriguing than those that do.