This felt very free jazz-y and fusion, at least for the first part. I don't really see what it has all to do with the theme, it feels very out of place.

The second section had interesting ideas, though some janky composition at times as well as rhythm that don't seem much controlled.

While I do like your jazzy ideas, I'm not really convinced by your submission, though it is decently mixed. Avantgardisme can fit sometimes, but it's a rather risky decision when it comes to ambient works.

Much support and love !

That middle section is really nice, I like that arpeggiator. I think because you're not trying to play something as complex, it let you get more in the flow with it.

One of the reasons I love my lyres is that they allow me to improvise in a more controlled manner, where I'm not having to search for things - they let me narrow down what I'm doing.

So... one thing I'm going to challenge you to do is improvise to a metronome (or perfect beat track). Even if you play with a lot of dynamics, a metronome is one of the best ways to get more control over those dynamics. There are sections in your improvisations where it sounds like you're slightly searching for the notes. But, what you do well with this is that you do just keep going and are generally landing it fairly well, especially considering the complexity of the improv.

Anyways... part of my process is that I do a lot of improvising, and then I record snippets from those improvisations that I really like (i.e. even on my phone or humming) and then I take time to more carefully develop them, playing them.

I also layer my tracks and improvise off of what I've already put down, but each track is simpler so it allows me to be more dynamic in what I put down as well. Because I have to play to myself, I also then have to get better at timing/rhythm and being in a consistent flow.

I would also echo comments that it's not quite hitting the theme, but that with the right sounds, you could do it. On a more philosophical note, I find that a lot of this stuff revolves around harmonizing what is your style with the image in question.

So, my thoughts on a process for you:

1. Do a lot of improv.

2. Pick the best parts of your improv that hit the theme the best.

3. Build off of those sounds you like the best in your DAW. 

But overall, this is great work, and you're definitely improving, and I really love seeing you show up to each jam with something new.

Interesting approach no doubt, but I think it would be a better fit for this theme just an exploration of the middle part of the song.
Also some instruments seem to be fighting a bit and a bit harsh, but maybe its to give the 8-bittish feel.

Good job, take care :)

This honestly might be one of my favorite tracks that I've heard from you so far.

It kinda gives me like Final Fantasy vibes from the SNES era. I especially liked that section starting at the ~1 minute mark and how it contrasts with the rest of the piece. Your use of harmony for this section in particular was lovely to hear.

Less is more seems to have made a nice impact here. 

Don't really have much in the way of feedback, just wanted to say I enjoyed what I heard. Keep up the good work :)

This doesn't quite feel ambient at all. Sort of feels more along the lines of sequence based synth work. I don't really get frozen tundra or any of the art piece for the jam in this track. It feels to digital and some of the structure seems more anthematic than ambient. Not a bad song at all, just doesn't come across as in line with the theme or tone of the jam.