This was a nice track, good work 🙂 I'm basically going to just echo what others have already said; I found it little too bright, I think the guitar in particular (which was otherwise perfect for the vibe). Just bringing down those upper-mid or higher freqs possibly (I'm still developing my ear for frequency bands haha) would make it sit better I think. Definitely a cool surf rock vibe that I enjoyed and it grooved nicely (the head bop never lies). Good instrument and tonal choices all around other than the minor EQ thing, imo. My only genuine complaint is that it ended when it did 😄 I reckon if you had added a little turnaround to cap it off then it would be perfect for what you were going for 👌 Solid effort.

This my favourite one. I like the guitar, esp with how you used the bridge (or I assume close to) pickup to make that surf rock style sound. Tho I wish the guitar would break up a little the clean sound fits it nicely. 5 Stars!

I gave this high marks everywhere basically.  Good energy, good work on the Guitar (guessing maybe manually performed with a real guitar? if not then decent use of inflection in synth tweaking).  Organ was perfect match to guitar.  Fits right in with the beginning of a story in like a Mario RPG or something.

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Lovely improvisation that really captures the tropical theme – I can hear the waves! It grooves nicely too. There's a bit too much energy around 2kHz in the mix, which makes it a bit sharp. A small tweak there could make it even smoother.