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The frozen waste - memories confined in a void's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Correlation to Theme | #16 | 3.359 | 3.562 |
| Sense of Atmosphere | #18 | 3.418 | 3.625 |
| Listenability | #19 | 3.359 | 3.562 |
| Execution | #19 | 3.300 | 3.500 |
| Composing Quality | #21 | 3.182 | 3.375 |
| Overall | #21 | 3.290 | 3.490 |
| Overall Uniqueness/Creativity | #23 | 3.123 | 3.312 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
Well, I wasn't going to submit this as I really don't think it's up to standard but I am to blame for the lack thereof, so I might as well do it anyway. The idea is very simple; a space that eternally contains memories, that's how I interpreted the theme of this jam for me. Since my favourite game as of now is Honkai: Star Rail, one will likely hear some inspiration (though not nearly as good, duh). I'm specifically referring to the piece "New Page" by Hoyo-Mix. It's a real shame that I screwed over my time management as this was a lot of fun. Well, lesson for next time, I suppose. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this little, slightly unfinished thing!
Screenshot of DAW
Is in the submission
Description of Setup (Optional but recommended)
I only used the already available plugins of Logic Pro (Mainly Alchemy and acoustic instruments), partially because I am too lazy to create a more advanced setup but also because it's hard to find plugins that have good quality without being too pricy, at least in my case. I do think that Alchemy can work pretty well if used right (bingo, I don't use it right).
Lessons Learned
time management, time management, time management. Also, the instruments, as well as the arrangement, should be more alive
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Good sense of atmosphere, I'd say to pace it a bit slower and create more space, it feels a lil busy at parts.
Sometimes less is more ;)
Good job! Take care :)
On scope, that was a big lesson for me where I actually had some success in working with a limited timeframe, but only because I have been doing these jams for a while. I'm really glad you brought up the time constraint into this - because that is actually a place where feedback can still be helpful.
What you did in the time is still pretty good. Definitely looking forward too hearing your work in future jams!
Great job, and good on you for submitting despite the time pressure.
This is great! You're certainly being too hard on yourself. The secret to succeeding under time pressure is to set your scope right, and keep it simple and achievable. It's a lesson I'm still trying to learn, but which you have clearly done. The sounds are well-chosen and effective, the mix is clean, and it's easy to listen to. Good job!
I can relate to the time management aspect; some people work better with less time, but more time was definitely needed this time around. I like the simplicity of your submission, though. I think it worked in your favor to depict a scenic frozen vibe. I would like it if you posted your fully-done version on discord in the future! I plan on doing the same (if I get to it lol). Great work!
It’s simple and short, and it sounds surprisingly great—especially considering you seemed to be short on time. It’s very well done, elegant, and you should be proud of it!
Where can we listen to this? I don't see a link for the submission anywhere.
Really like this, it has a great feel to it with all the sounds working well together, making a nice gentle groove.
Good stuff!
Sounds really pretty, good job!
You’ve made it!!!!! I suppose we had all our problems with time. I remember discussing with Fox on Friday evening if that really is our song now and lamenting on how it may end and us both crunching thru the weekend for mixing. So don’t be to harsh on yourself. It sounded beautiful anyway.
You’re conveying that feeling of the vast emptiness very well and I really dig that Marimba-ish sound. Of course the mix and sound design feels a bit heavy handed and could use some more finesse. But regarding that this song isn’t even finished, I can’t wait to hear the full song at its final form. Because what we can hear so far shows promise.