The game is beautiful

Nice little tale with good writing! 

Left me wanting for more, though :)

You said it was your first time using Twine? How was it? Can we expect more interactive fiction from you? <3

Nice little story, I got both endings (at least I think there are only two). Good use of Twine, that engine is so underrated in my opinion. Congrats on your game! :)

Good use of prerequisite. The story did not draw me in.

Cool use of the  prerequisite, it's   like a choose your own adventure book but every time you go back and try to find a good ending you just find a more cursed ending instead.

The story is kinda interesting, and you fairly used the prerequisite, but the 5s loop music drove me crazy lol. Anyway, good job :)