I like the buildup throughout the piece. I think it pays off very well. While I do like the energy the piece has now, I think upping it a bit with some more intense percussion would really pay off. I think that the ending was a bit rushed. You have a really nice long buildup into a nice payoff, and then you bring the energy back down. I think for the amount of energy you had built up, the ending would benefit from being extended a bit.
This is very beautiful and relaxing. It instantly makes me want to lie down on the grass, look at the stars, and just think about things. Thank you for your work!
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I like the buildup throughout the piece. I think it pays off very well. While I do like the energy the piece has now, I think upping it a bit with some more intense percussion would really pay off. I think that the ending was a bit rushed. You have a really nice long buildup into a nice payoff, and then you bring the energy back down. I think for the amount of energy you had built up, the ending would benefit from being extended a bit.
Thank you for your feedback! I’ll implement some changes and show the before and after in the discord. 👍
Somber piece. Some nice dynamics in the whole note horns but felt the choirs would've benefited from some crescendos/decrescendos.
Thanks for the feed back, I’ll apply them when I get to it!
damn fine work, the choirs make the main harp arpeggio all the more haunting
This is very beautiful and relaxing. It instantly makes me want to lie down on the grass, look at the stars, and just think about things. Thank you for your work!