I like the buildup throughout the piece. I think it pays off very well. While I do like the energy the piece has now, I think upping it a bit with some more intense percussion would really pay off. I think that the ending was a bit rushed. You have a really nice long buildup into a nice payoff, and then you bring the energy back down. I think for the amount of energy you had built up, the ending would benefit from being extended a bit.
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Somber piece. Some nice dynamics in the whole note horns but felt the choirs would've benefited from some crescendos/decrescendos.
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Scrap Metal Horizondamn fine work, the choirs make the main harp arpeggio all the more haunting
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Bleakgrave DistrictThis is very beautiful and relaxing. It instantly makes me want to lie down on the grass, look at the stars, and just think about things. Thank you for your work!
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