So I wrote this thing. It's the first time for me, so I'm looking for general feedback on it. I must get good so I can keep writing.
Here's the page: https://edoardo-piergentili.itch.io/archivist-interview-transcripts
I manily want to know if people get stuck on superficial stuff with a literalist approach or if someone actually gets it.
Thanks.
Id recommend either giveit away for 1 Dollar but add a "demo" where People can Test it a Bit before purchase or free with donation option, but keep in mind that Most devs with Low follower Count aka beginners wont sell much Games as ppl dont know you, and by giving it away for free you will easier find followers and your Stuff will (slowly) attract more and more ppl .
Best regards love and peace
You are right. Thinking about how the factions work was not low effort at all. I even have a lot of digital artwork (no AI), concept art. But writing this was indeed about speed more than anything. I'd like to publish more stuff about the same fictional universe, while taking more and more steps to make it better. It's an iterative process. I will lower the price.
I lowered the price and posted a simple devlog. I'm working on the next book and... Oh boy, it could take me a year to complete the thing. I'm reading, writing, taking notes, listening to advice, making modifications to a few pictures I'm going to post. It's a lot of work. But this time I have a better understanding of what I'm doing.
