This is already visually stunning, could use more screenshots though, I think it would help a lot!! Because I think your game is really cool and stylized + background art is phenomenal !!

VERA MADE ME JUMP!!

Overall I got through most of the game [1 Ending so far], found myself invested (though dialogue games not my cup o' tea) this could be something really big

[Update] Forgot to mention the music is super nice + the settings are such a nice option to have, really makes your game more polished + I think a web build would be awesome cuz it'll make more people access the game!!

Nice little teaser for what appears to be a thriller/mystery VN? I really dig the art. It's like diving into a Grimm's tale storybook. Nicely done! Interested to see where things go!

This is really nice! it has that sort of sherlock holmes kind of feel with it, or a whodunnit story in general, and the art style really adds to the story, and the jumpscare really got me. Great work!

heyyy this was good! I'm glad I managed to squeeze this one in!

I will flag this to circle back to after the jam to see your progress on it!

love the art, I actually enjoy the sketchy drawn look over a quick flat render, so that's a solid choice I think.

characters are interesting, I dig it!

GG

GOODNESS ME you really gave me a few scares there 😭😭.
Well done with all the art and writing! And the music/sfx choices were really good!

I get really scared, so this scared me aaa. But this was super cool. It looks so great. Reminded me of slay the princess at times. Amazing job!!

These illustrations are great and have a lot of style. The story and world building were interesting as well, would like to see it finished.

Holy! Good game. Nothing more to say.

Love the stylization and writing! Only suggestion could be that for a jam game, less can be more, and that text felt a bit much at times? Incredible writing but a bit heavy when we have to rate 1.2k games! great job, beautiful project, no bugs!

Absolutely gorgeous writing as well and adore the characterization. The artwork and music also cannot be understated in how they add to the overall atmosphere. Wonderful entry! 

I like the sketchy watercolor art style. And great world building, you did a lot with a little! I've never made a visual novel but I might try my hand at it :)