Probably going to be the last game I play for the jam! I really liked the narrative here and the art/writing were both really effective at keeping me engrossed in the game! Fantastic work. I'm hoping for more down the line! There is a certain energy between Akira and Sera, and I am HERE for it. I can't really suggest anything that hasn't already been put forward, so I'll just say thanks for making it!

wow wow wow! that was really cool! I usually don't play VNs but the art was very good for the limited time. Though the story felt almost like a culmination of a bunch of other stories, it was very well done. It felt very cohesive and had me waiting for what was next. Super well done and very impressive for a game jam. The writing, the art, the sound design, all got me immersed in this world and asking questions. I would love to have seen more options for the player to select dialogue towards the beginning of the game. I liked the idea of almost responding how I would. Even though it might not change the story or be to different, I believe it really helped me as the player feel more immersed, as if I was talking to the characters through Akira. I'd love to get to know the characters and world more and really feel the burn of the ending (no spoilers :) but with the time given, it is impressive that you were able to get what you did done. To nit pick a little, some of the dialogue felt just a lliiitttllle to unnatural but not so much that I was taken out of the game. Some minor rewording or different phrasing would do the trick. Super enjoyable. Look forward to seeing more!