There's a soft bit of buzzing in the background, probably your mic picking up background noise. 2:02 feels a bit awkward, you kind of lose the tempo momentarily (honestly, could've just held out the note at the end of the phrase for a moment before resuming). That said, this piece has an interesting composition with solid rhythm, pleasant melodies. I like the transition at 2:45 and the key change at 3:32. I like the recurring motiff. 

Great writing and performing! The only criticism I have is to watch your rhythmic accuracy, it gets ever so slightly off here and there but that's if I'm being super critical. Really enjoyed this one, great job!

Yo! That’s so cool that you played this live! That must’ve taken a lot of work! I really like the grooves you played. Rhythmically interesting beginning to end 💪