Great game :) It's not really my kind of game... reading a lot of text doesn't resonate with me, but you did a nice job implementing all the details. The overall feel is awesome, the sound is great, and the visuals are also. 

I found this game very moving. Great visuals, music, and storytelling. The way I felt playing this reminded me of when I played Gris, a platformer where the main character is overcoming grief. It also has colors being added to the world and musical developments as you progress, but conveys these things without any written narrative and more through overcoming physical obstacles. Written narrative is hard and I respect the direction and vision you had with this. Amazing work on this submission!

I feel this was very creative and meaningful.

Really fantastic creepy / nostalgic visuals! Some of the shots have so much cinematic energy. I see the vision the game was going for with the dialogue  but I think it was a bit too obscure. And maybe not minimalistic and to the point enough. You want a healthy amount of artsy feel in a game but dont want it to be too confusing I think. But refinement of the text is something that can be hard in such a short timeframe. Great game regardless! 

Very interesting game with styled visuals.

The story was cool. I love how the visuals become more colorful when the story progresses

Very good work.

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