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Clover Revenge [Final]

How will your kingdom be avenged? · By evelai

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Impressions

A topic by Pluck283 created Feb 12, 2024 Views: 8,334 Replies: 12

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Pluck2832 years ago

I found this to be a very gripping story and a generally good game. I was able to save everyone but the elf princess without cheats. I really do hope the sequel is in the works. The reveal at the end of the game was interesting but brings into question how the hourglass is made. The end really leaves on a cliffhanger, so I do hope there is a sequel.

I have found the trust to be broken. One of the Lords will tell you to not speak to him again and the other doesn't help you, but then I get a black screen telling me both of them trust me. Also, the aldy's sex scenes played in parallel. I would get all 4's intro then all 4's 2nd.

evelaiDeveloper2 years ago

Ohh you can't be serious -_-

I'll check it right away and try to fix it. With so many different progressions in the game, I think I might have missed some of them. I'll get back to you...

evelaiDeveloper2 years ago

And, uh... Who's Aldy?

Pluck2832 years ago

lady, not aldy. When you open up all the functions in town (blacksmith, library, bakery) the scenes play in parallel.

evelaiDeveloper2 years ago

I think you're talking about the sex night arc. The scene where the side characters are shown one after another after gaining the trust of the girls. Don't worry, this was done intentionally so there's no mistake here. As for the endings, I congratulate you for such a perfect progression. Normally it's really hard to reach the perfect ending :D

evelaiDeveloper2 years ago

I think you ended the game with Remmy. She's going to be the most influential character in the second game, so it's good that you reached that ending and got information from her.

Pluck2832 years ago(+1)

Lol, my want to hang out with Remmy led me to getting the perfect ending.

evelaiDeveloper2 years ago

I looked at all the endings and I couldn't find a problem. It's impossible for the scenes to play consecutively because they all end with a "jump" code.

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Can anyone tell me which songs are used in this game? I tried to shazam them but Shazam couldn't catch. Those in-game songs are awesome. Please anyone give me the names of the songs 😥

Sebyby364 days ago

My impression of the game is very good ! Such a quality product published for free for everyone. And especially with the AI help, it looks easily like a $20 - $30 game. However, the degree of freedom in the game surely does not match the industrial standard. A lot of unnecessary sex scenes happen just to fap but men, I don't wanna fap with such a great storyline. And also, the amount of efforts needed to romance any female character is technically pornographic effort, meaning 0. They just fall for you no matter what, lmao. But honestly I love ur game, not specially the best interaction but definitely a creative storyline. And I also loved the AI employment in making the game. It saved so much work and efforts for people just wanna play a porn games and fap.

Zarkill1322 days ago

Hi, I can't progress in the story because every time, the elf gets poisoned by the wine. What can I do?

mmsechs272 days ago

Hey man.

I respect the effort you've put into the game. the graphics and SFX are done really well, also the game concept and story narrative are nice.

Now I personally cannot enjoy these aspects when the writing is as cringy as it is, not to mention the absolute lack of character depth and the pacing of events. It's like they're all puppets waiting for my command with no will of their own, which obviously totally kills the immersion. The super power given is time warp, but apparently it's also +200 charm with a base charisma of +80. I'm speaking somewhat out of my arse, but you get what I'm saying.

Now in the end the most important thing is that you enjoy what you've created, but since you've shared it i think it honest to let you know that the games writing and character creation shows either no motivation to be creative, the inability to be creative, or lack of information on how people work outside of what you imagine.

The more I see this issue the more I feel pushed to do this myself, but that's a lot more work for my vision then it is for yours, you simply just need someone to write for you.

End of rant. There's probably a lot of work that I cannot see, so I want to restate the respect I have for the effort although being pretty rude with my opinion,

Tata

evelaiDeveloper233 days ago(+2)

I agree with you. To be honest, Clover Revenge was my first game where I started figuring out how to code in Ren’Py. I focused so much on the coding and the main story that I couldn’t dive deep into the characters. Sometimes I still run into a similar issue in my newer games.

As the number of characters and artworks grows, trying to keep everything consistent - and going deeper into each character - can sometimes pull me away from the main story flow. But all of this has been a valuable learning experience for me, especially thanks to the feedback I’ve received, whether it was positive or negative.

So thank you for your feedback.

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Clover Revenge [Final]

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