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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Category: Cinematography | #106 | 3.395 | 3.667 |
| Category: Voice Acting | #106 | 2.315 | 2.500 |
| Story | #110 | 3.703 | 4.000 |
| Visuals | #127 | 3.703 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #132 | 3.395 | 3.667 |
| Category: Music | #170 | 2.469 | 2.667 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Content Warnings
Body horror, mild violence, vomiting, disturbing imagery and audio
Log Line
Lose your way, lose your say. Proprietary Body is a visual novel that follows the story of a protagonist who falls back into his past... in order to not lose any more of his livelihood. He ends up losing something more than that.
Team Credits & Cast
[Development & Story & Graphics] venacava.exe, [Cutscene Artist] aorticdecay
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Comments
I loved this!!! I think the art style is so charming and the story was super interesting!!! Overall great job :)) Love how the game was built, the RPG aspect was so cool too!!
This was cool!
I liked the RPG feel of it, the design of the interviewer is AMAZING, and the story reminds me SO MUCH of the song, Fine Print! :0
The Interviewer is basically like the singer of that song, really cool! A lot of work was put into this, I really love all the other character designs, too! :D
For constructive feedback, the only adjustments I'd reccomend is perhaps music, even though the silence in-between like keyboard typing kind of fits within the story, so low priotity, and things kind of get a little repetitive in the second half of the game, which isn't too bad either, HOWEVER THOUGH, in the beginning I had no idea what I was looking for and literally clicked every single interactable object EXCEPT the one I needed ðŸ˜
So um, probably have a line telling you what you need, which was present everywhere after the start. ^^
All in all, great concept, excellent work m8, good luck with the judges!
Oh also, if you don't mind, do you think you might be able to play/rate my game? Only if you want to though, no need! :D
Have an excellent game jam m8, good luck!!! >:D
I'm so sorry I forgot to reply--thank you so much!
I didn't really add a lot of music because, well, there was not enough time to go through several tracks that didn't fit the vibe I wanted at all...
Repetitiveness is the point--go in, go back home, go in again. A cycle that doesn't end. There were supposed to be more segments in-between, but again, time is my greatest enemy...
I also didn't consider the beginning would be unclear--I'll definitely make sure to adjust it when I update the game! Thanks for the feedback and thanks again for playing! It means a lot to me :D