I really like the story, and I like how you and Eleanor get together at the end and I like how she rescues you. I feel like interacting with Erec would be cool through, to try nd throw him off your trail/do something to throw him of the romance. I also want to punch him and get away with it
Ah yes, nothing quite like some taboo political romance. Ages like a fine wine. Which is to say the interactions are pretty cute and I was pretty invested in both flirting with Eleanor while keeping myself at least slightly undercover. I did fail at that, but Eleanor rescued me in the end. All I'll say for issues is I noticed that route I took still had some leftover programmer notes to signify which ending I was about to get reading: "(5 to 5-1)" just before I got thrown into the cell.
OMG I loved this! I was blushing right along with Yvainne, the romance was so cute and the options were clear to follow. I love the way you describe the emotions and settings, I felt like I could really connect with the PC. I really liked the twist on one of the endings where you get thrown in prison, I thought I was being sneaky enough to get away with it but nope lol.
It could be interesting to interact with Erec a little more during the moments we're flirting with Eleanor, understandable if that wasn't possible due to word count. Even without him appearing much it still felt whole and fun to play!
This was such a good story! It was really beautifully written and the romance was super cute. The only criticism I really have is that we don't interact much with Lord Erec. We know about his mannerisms based on the introduction and inner monologue, but only really talk to him at the beginning and end. Other than that, though, I liked the story a lot, the descriptiveness of it was well written, and the romance aspect felt like a good pace, it really felt like a quiet, forbidden romance. Good job!
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I really like the story, and I like how you and Eleanor get together at the end and I like how she rescues you. I feel like interacting with Erec would be cool through, to try nd throw him off your trail/do something to throw him of the romance. I also want to punch him and get away with it
Ah yes, nothing quite like some taboo political romance. Ages like a fine wine. Which is to say the interactions are pretty cute and I was pretty invested in both flirting with Eleanor while keeping myself at least slightly undercover. I did fail at that, but Eleanor rescued me in the end. All I'll say for issues is I noticed that route I took still had some leftover programmer notes to signify which ending I was about to get reading: "(5 to 5-1)" just before I got thrown into the cell.
im pretty sure i didnt leave those notes what passage was that cause it sounds like a bug
OMG I loved this! I was blushing right along with Yvainne, the romance was so cute and the options were clear to follow. I love the way you describe the emotions and settings, I felt like I could really connect with the PC. I really liked the twist on one of the endings where you get thrown in prison, I thought I was being sneaky enough to get away with it but nope lol.
It could be interesting to interact with Erec a little more during the moments we're flirting with Eleanor, understandable if that wasn't possible due to word count. Even without him appearing much it still felt whole and fun to play!
This was such a good story! It was really beautifully written and the romance was super cute. The only criticism I really have is that we don't interact much with Lord Erec. We know about his mannerisms based on the introduction and inner monologue, but only really talk to him at the beginning and end. Other than that, though, I liked the story a lot, the descriptiveness of it was well written, and the romance aspect felt like a good pace, it really felt like a quiet, forbidden romance. Good job!