Wow, that was an effectively unsettling story! Was thinking for a moment it would be romantic and then it turned into something quite different. The music really adds to the experience, especially near the end.

Great atmosphere, it's like living in a classic 90s horror movie.

This was an unpleasant time! You deliver the unsettling atmosphere with your writing + the music and other elements. I experienced this whole scenario and my first ending as very horrifying indeed--definitely meets the brief of the comp. Good job. 

I’ve had some trouble deciding what exactly to write in this comment, because I struggled with the game itself. It made me deeply uncomfortable, and I wasn’t sure that it was meant to do so in the way that I did.

A lot of the comments describe the game as romantic, but I was overwhelmed by how well you presented Andrew as a realistic abuser. He made my skin crawl from the first meeting, and all I wanted to do was get away from him. Yet he was also presented as in some ways attractive, especially in the shed sequence.

After looking at the various endings I’ve come to the conclusion that he is meant to be the monster I took him to be from the very start, and for the same reasons — he’s a narcissistic abuser, and a sexual predator.