It's a pretty good track, quite catchy, well-structured, the rhythmic part is really good. The melodic parts are good individually but don't fit very well together I think, not sure why, maybe it's the lead. 

Also the transition in the middle feels a bit too long/empty, not sure if it should be shortened by half by keeping everything in there, or if something else should be added or if the sustain on the chords isn't long enough.

There's definitely potential in this track though, it could go in different directions. The supporting melodies and the chords in the second part kinda gave me a Darksynth vibe. Hope that can be useful feedback !

I think this fits really well into the video game ambience brief and with a nice clean finish, I don't think that the chromatism really lands for me however. This is by no means the only way to approach it, but often having a strong initial tonal pallet established and then branching out in note choices from there can work. You're giving an implied 'direction' to any chromatism then added, borrowing from different keys in relation to where you came from to create and resolve tension. 

A strong submission and hella vibey in all however.