I did suspect the twist, but that didn't detract from how good of a story this is ^^ would love to see how different scores play into the game and how the story unfolds in the future

Very interesting start of a story. I am definitely intrigued to wnat to know what would come next. Good job!

Writing reminded me of old text adventure games, sweet nostalgia <3 Very solid writing overall, good tone, clear. The amnesiac story is an cliché one, but this is a good execution, did take a while before it took off. Left off on a fantastic cliffhanger!

An intriguing beginning of the story! Good luck with further writing and developing the game! :)