Lovely story! It felt really wholesome. It would be really great if there were some BGM with it!! I felt there could have been a stronger emphasis on the resilience part with more challenges faced on the way. 

I appreciate the different choices. I ended up falling down the bridge railing. It would have been nice if it was longer with more obstacles. Or maybe your brother appears later after helping you get to the peak at different times. I think it was a touching story 

A sweet heartfelt story and a promising idea. It know we can all only get done in 72 hours what we can get done, but it ended a bit abruptly and I was hoping for more, which is a good thing! Congrats!