Wow! Incredible. The guitars/strings, the progression, the vocals — and my god, the vocals are amazing and fit perfectly with the guitars and the themes. Perfect! I need a whole album of this music. Great work!

Wow...absolutely beautiful song! The chords, the vocals, the lyrics, it's all so mesmerizing. Also, you're such an amazing guitar player, I really loved all of the different riffs and solos throughout the song. I've already listened a few times over and over! 😅 

Already said it before in the discord, but really like the vocals 😄

Really great performances, a solid mix and just overall sound world, I think the only thing that stuck out to me a bit, was the distorted guitar at 02:05 onwards was a bit heavy and when the vocals came back in, it ended up fighting for attention with the vocals a bit for me.

Vocal production is also a a lot better than what I usually manage to do, so I'd say you did a really good job!

You probably know of it, but in case you didn't, the Audio Alignment Panel in Cubase (under the audio menu) is great for getting vocal doubles tight (if you don't mind loosing a bit of the human element, that is 😉) and has worked great for me.

Stellar work!

Really stunning! Progressive Rock isn't something you hear a lot in jams like these and it was a pleasant surprise! The vocals especially are fantastic.  My favorite bit was around 3:10 or so, that little lead in the background is so nice, it's small but it adds so much! great work

Wow! What a track, felt like a whole movie. That introduction was awesome, and your vocals killer. The sound was super professional and full. Kept me entranced all the way through

Pink Floyd influence is strong here, and it suits the theme so well. The sound design at the beginning in particular is subtle but top notch.

You can really perceive the “demo” feel in this, both in strengths and weaknesses: the raw, organic instrumentation gives a vibe of rugged authenticity to it all, although at times vocals were indeed a little rough. I appreciate you tried to find your own singing style. 

Bravo nonetheless!

Oh my goodness dude! This is by far some of your best work. Love the vocals and just the whole song. You are so talented! The guitars and instruments work so well together with your voice.

I love the beginning dialogue, that really set the mood for the whole song. I really hope you will be able to finish this project. Its awesome. Crazy respect to you! Vocals are hard and you did a great job of mixing them.

You are a boss Einel. But as Kale said, the only thing that could be done to improve it is the mixing I think.

I've already heard this a lot on the Discord, so I don't have too much to say, but the vocals, as always, are super beautiful. I think that dialogue at the beginning was really well done and set a nice tone for the whole piece. The mixing is very well done! And the entire feel of the song really gets to you and sets the mood!

Really great submission, really great guy (no bias(probably)), Great work! :D

Vocals are awesome. Voice acting is awesome. Your voice is definitely an asset for future submissions, and is something to develop further.

You have an interesting voice as well, definitely good for vocals/voice acting.

This was overall just very enjoyable.

I'm not sure what I would add, to be honest. Mix wise, there could be perfecting, but its well within the range of professional. Great work!

The voice acting is really well done and is an engaging intro to the track! I really like the direction you took on this jam’s theme. Full points for uniqueness from me! While I don’t feel equipped to comment on most of this given lack of experience in this genre (and there are some great comments I see below), I do have some formal vocal training and what struck me about your vocals is that it is clear that you understand the words that you are singing and that extra bit of emotional congruence goes a long way to grab ahold of me tight throughout the song and touched me on a very human level. I really like this as is, but I also am interested to hear what it would sound like with the orchestral accompaniment like you suggest. Tremolo swells at the “feeling tired” part feel like they would add rather than detract possibly? Good luck with finishing your project and thank you for sharing!

Dang dude this was absolutely lovely! The vibes are top notch and the time signature changes were a really nice touch.

While I enjoyed the melody in your voice, I really like the part writing you did in your guitar tracks especially with the voice leading in the distorted sections. My only real bit of criticism, which may just be my personal taste, is that I might consider experimenting with different tones for some of those distorted lead lines near the end. To me each part sounds a little treble-ly and I would probably try playing with a darker/more neck pickup-sounding tone even if for the sake of variety.

Listening to the instrumental track makes me think I could really do more with the space in my own mixes, there's always so many little details in your work that I could probably hear something new every time I hear it.

Thanks for sharing this, and keep up the good work :)

P.S. all hail space duck