The dark and spooky vibes anchored on grounded family drama are really working. Great job incorporating everyone's talents into the project! 

Very immersive, polished, and complete. The first section of writing is particularly evocative, and it all works together very well. The music, art, and CSS effects bring it to an entirely different level.

Wow, how did you create so much in such a short window of time! Even after checking that there was a few peeps involved I'm impressed?

Dark... coherent... full of hurt. Loved it.

this was an incredibly immersive experience, the music, the ui, and the art created a perfect atmosphere for the story. excellent work!