Very fun, clever writing across a very expensive experience. I too may have gotten lost in the sauce but the fact you managed to put so much in your game in so little time is also a feat! Id love to see what you could do with such a fun, sci-fi plot post competition. Great work!

That was an amazing sci-fi adventure and it was a pleasure to read it! I also got a bit lost in the variants and got stuck, had to read the walk through to succeed, may be there is way to re-arrange the options, so they won't overwhelm the player:) 

My favorite part of the game was allowing me to cry. I felt so lost and I just loved that the game acknowledged that potential feeling and give an option for me to feel frustrated and telling me that I could keep going. I think that right there encapsulated the theme so beautifully that I didn't quite expect. 

The beginning was written pretty well, but you did have to wade through a lot before you could do anything which sort of put me on autopilot read mode without getting to really put myself in it. I think just a few choices in the beginning, even if they don't branch or have a huge effect on the game, would force me to slow down and just absorb the setting a bit. But once you got to exploring the ship , I was surprised at how detailed you designed the geography of the ship. There were constant stakes and obstacles in each area, which forces you to think a little bit about how you approached getting off the ship.

But as I said, I did get lost, which was fine at first, but then I just kept going into a loop over and over of things I'd already done. I think this could be alleviated by graying out options you've already explored. But just amazed at how you were able to accomplish all this design beyond just the writing.