Judge feedback

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• A very interesting plot, with what I think is the best cinematography among all Novejam entries! At first, I thought it was going to be a sad love story, but then it shifted into something unexpected. I am a bit bummed that it’s very short and feels more like a proof of concept. I also wonder whether the outcome would change if we played the sentence-filling minigame differently. It might be nice if players could influence the fates of both characters through their own POV.
• This was such a gripping and tense story! I LOVED filling in the blanks and the utilization of choices. There wasn't much in terms of visuals aside from the few backgrounds and two sprites, but from what we did see, I thought they were incorporated well with the cinematography. In terms of utilizing the theme, you did a great job at that! I'm really interested seeing how you expand upon this prototype. :)