Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• For a WIP, I really liked the artwork and I'm intrigued where the story's going, though it's hard to judge it as a whole since it is only just the first chapter. However, I think the game's lacking severely in terms of SFX and cinematography. Since it has some action elements, you really want to add some sword clashing + monster SFX + screen shaking to really immerse the player into the game. Additionally, I think the incorporation of the theme was really weak. I also wasn't a fan of disabling rollback. That's a must-have feature for VNs. I get why you would want to disable that during the rock, paper, scissors sections but otherwise? Turn it back on during the VN sections.
• I guess the developers were aiming for a fantasy-action type of story, which I think might be more suitable for the Battle Action Fantasy VN Jam. While I enjoyed the character art, I couldn’t clearly see the connection between the jam theme and the story. That said, if the developers plan to continue working on this project, I hope they expand the story further and find ways to make the action elements more integrated with the narrative or worldbuilding.