Of course we all want the rate4rate but sometimes honest feedback can be more valuable as we all try to level up our skillset in game jams!
I will play every game that rates our game and give as thorough feedback as possible!
Our teams submission is a Psychological Space Horror Game with a visual twist elicited by in game choices.
https://narknon0.itch.io/holonic
Looking forward to spitballing, rating, and sharing new ideas!
Even at a first glance the art is super compelling... the juxtaposition between the cheery and bright colors really put me on edge.
Just downloaded! Expect more feedback on your submission page!
Please take with a grain of salt I realize you only had 7 days (not sure if solo dev).
Pros:
Itch Page designed superbly
Amazing character design + world building. Strong Narrative focus
UI was polished and consistent with the art style of the game.
The contrast between the joyful feel of the art with the heavy choice gave me a heavy dose of horror induced cognitive dissonance.
Small things like the roaches + cats went a long way in making it feel immersive
Title Screen changing at the end.... 10/10 nice touch.
Overall very polished game with sick animations
Cons:
UI moves a little slowly
Music during cut scenes were great but wish there was more during nominal gameplay
Pacing was slow towards the middle.... few more sounds + animations would elevate this to a 5/5 game (currently 4.6 in my book)
Fantastic job! Hoping you create more visual novels with the same level of character design!!!!
