The writing is very wonderful and builds a sense of dreaminess while playing. The sprite art as well as the main/game menu art is very nicely done and well executed. However, the game is very brief and it may just be me personally but I did not fully understand the premise of what was going on which hindered my experience a little. I think also some music would enhance this project. All in all, a very sweet yet brief game and I'm hoping to see more of what you do with it in the future :3
this was lovely! i adored the beautiful art and the writing, it painted the most vivid picture of yearning and a love that's been halted by circumstance! the game was short but it totally hooked me into wanting to see more of these characters! even as the story is now, it's going to stick in my head! thanks for submitting it!
Super short, but a really good idea of the direction you're taking this in! I like the colored-pencil-like art style and the GUI for the save and load screens is really cute. I look forward to when you add music and colored in backgrounds, because the setup is solid <3
The more I think about this game, the more I like it. So very simple, but so good. The writing is delightfully tender. The intimate, quiet atmosphere of the library is a good symbolical representation of the characters' relationship. The tension is evident, bubbling at the surface, yet it is never realized and we are left with empty hearts and a peculiar sense of longing at the end. Quiet, very intimate. Just like the library. Having no sound plays into the intended feeling of the game, I like that choice. I would've loved some sound effects for the buttons, but that's my only note!
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This was very short but super cute, I truly loved the writing!
The writing is very wonderful and builds a sense of dreaminess while playing. The sprite art as well as the main/game menu art is very nicely done and well executed. However, the game is very brief and it may just be me personally but I did not fully understand the premise of what was going on which hindered my experience a little. I think also some music would enhance this project. All in all, a very sweet yet brief game and I'm hoping to see more of what you do with it in the future :3
this was lovely! i adored the beautiful art and the writing, it painted the most vivid picture of yearning and a love that's been halted by circumstance! the game was short but it totally hooked me into wanting to see more of these characters! even as the story is now, it's going to stick in my head! thanks for submitting it!
Super short, but a really good idea of the direction you're taking this in! I like the colored-pencil-like art style and the GUI for the save and load screens is really cute. I look forward to when you add music and colored in backgrounds, because the setup is solid <3
The more I think about this game, the more I like it. So very simple, but so good. The writing is delightfully tender. The intimate, quiet atmosphere of the library is a good symbolical representation of the characters' relationship. The tension is evident, bubbling at the surface, yet it is never realized and we are left with empty hearts and a peculiar sense of longing at the end. Quiet, very intimate. Just like the library. Having no sound plays into the intended feeling of the game, I like that choice. I would've loved some sound effects for the buttons, but that's my only note!