Avant garde sekali, atmosfirnya ane suka, namun banyak sekali yang enggak dijelasin sama sekali, apa ini dan apa itu hanya plot-nya ditinggal begitu saja, pendek namun sudah cukup menarik mungkin tinggal dikembangkan lagi
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Little Blue Wings for the Blue Girl's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Cinematography | #6 | 3.714 | 3.714 |
| Visuals | #8 | 4.286 | 4.286 |
| Story | #8 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
| Overall | #9 | 3.679 | 3.679 |
| Kesesuaian Tema | #13 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- I really enjoyed the music and story, though there were a few errors (i.e. in the very beginning where the MC says the teacher glances at him and then Amy before we even know her name is Amy), and some spelling or grammar mistakes that took me out of the story because they required me to re-read the sentence another time. When it comes to the theme, I think you did a decent job executing it. It hurt to see Amy + Ethan unable to be together, and how it's killing them both. I think it's quite beautiful to see Ethan accept Amy's passing, and see that even though she's gone physically, she'll always be by his side (in memory and through the moth that we saw in the ending).
- When others commented that some parts of the story were left hanging without explanation, I felt the same. There’s little to no explanation (or even hints) as to why the MC was trapped in the dark room before the scene suddenly shifts to Ethan’s life with Amy. While I can see their relationship growing, I don’t recall seeing much about their shared history or why Amy became such an important person to the MC. This is unfortunate, as knowing more about them would make it easier for the reader to care about Amy.
How does this project relate to the jam theme? (Judge Question)
[Spoiler Alert] Their relationship are growing, but fate decide that they can't stay together, thus "killing" them slowly and softly.






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