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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio Quality (mastering) | #42 | 2.692 | 2.692 |
| Theme | #47 | 2.462 | 2.462 |
| Creativity and originality | #47 | 2.615 | 2.615 |
| Overall | #48 | 2.323 | 2.323 |
| Overall impression | #49 | 1.923 | 1.923 |
| Composition & structure | #49 | 1.923 | 1.923 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Yup, it's rather diffucult to convey any core idea between these whirling notes. There should be somewhat a tree trunk or a spine to keep it all in form. It may be a rhytmic part such as drum pattern or melody with strong rhytmic accents. Keep up!
Thanks for the advice!
I liked the curiosity of your piece. Towards 1 min 45 seconds I started hearing a theme.
My two cents: If you decide to do something without a set key or time signature, it can start to feel disjointed if you're not careful. I'd suggest 1) finding some way to show a steady rhythm -- even a quiet drum in the background or a steady melody/harmony can help with that, and 2) in some way show a theme or melody throughout. I got some of the theme through your instrument selection, but I wanted more.
Can't wait to hear more from you!
Thank you