The build-up is too long and lacks direction. The chromatic note in the bass going up from first to second degree feels off and the lead synth with the heavy vibrato feels weirdly satirical. I like the parts with the beat going on, though.

That's definitely a strong start! These vibes gave me goosebumps and a warm feeling. The overall feeling I'd describe is like the credits rolling at the end of a film — like you've successfully finished a long journey. I'd love to hear this track polished and fine-tuned later. For now, it's a bit sketchy and simple.

I definitely started listening more during the second half. The first part felt a little flat at the start but picked up when the synth melody kicked in. 

When the middle section comes in, it makes you want to move! Good emotions in there!