That was really beautiful, and well written! Great narrative piece. The gameplay was also really cool, I loved the footsteps and the variety of minigames. Even as the minigames bounced around a lot, it still all felt cohesive and that it was serving the narrative structure.
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Creativity and Theme | #2 | 4.278 | 4.278 |
| Overall | #3 | 3.926 | 3.926 |
| Fun | #5 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Visuals and Sound | #6 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Beautiful game:) I love the art style, the concept. Overall very grat game!
I'm moved, that was really beautiful and the visual simplicity worked so well with your idea. I feel the basic premise of the game was only mildly related to the game jam's theme, but you did manage to incorporate it more through design choices. My only criticism is that like DimsdaleDimadome said some of the mini games snapped me out of the flow a little bit. But great job. The ending was the icing on the cake, glory to collaboration!!
Thank you so much ! I answered DimsdaleDimadome about the minigames, but I will add that the games were originally so much longer, when I playtested it I realized how much of a pain they are and made them shorter. But yeah the real problem wasn't only their duration but how they fit within the narration.
scrolling sns for motivation hits way too real, just got to make stuff even if its garbage cus garbage whether we like it or not is a thing
Keep creating my dudes
A really interesting and creative piece. I enjoyed the narrative. My only criticism is that the mini games were kind of minimalistic and lasted a little too long. They kind of distracted from the story.
The gameplay here was amazing. The art was also amazing. Not much more i could think of.


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