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Flaming Flagon v1.10

Meet all sorts of adventurers and co-workers here in Flaming Flagon! · By kulplant

Art critique?

A topic by FerreTrip created Jan 27, 2026 Views: 886 Replies: 2
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The art in this game is absolutely stellar!! Big beefy Pokémen in a somewhat sketchy style. I love it! But I noticed something when looking at Gunther.

If I'm not mistaken, one's biceps should always face the same direction the forearms are going. In other words, I think his held out arm should have the bicep facing up, and the other facing his body.

That said, I'm not the BEST at anatomy ^^; But it still looks odd to me.... I'm not trying to insult or anything, I'm just voicing my artistic opinion. As I said, the art itself is already incredible ^^

Edit: checking with my mother, who went to art school, yeah, it would benefit you to look over the anatomy a bit. Exaggeration is okay, and I am thankful you aren't doing the "draw every single cord of muscle" thing! But a bit more anatomy would help ^^

I apologize if I've offended or upset you; I simply want to help this become even better U_U

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you showed this to your mother???

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Just one screenshot, both of them clothed, bulges hidden behind the text box XD