I like the story. Definitely can see the Lord of the Rings influence. I also like your inspiration statement at the beginning where you explain how you got your ideas and say you had divine inspiration. Sometimes that is how it is. Very cool. Afterflame is a great idea and I love the rhyme, the talkative tomb, and the movement of the Lords. Using actual pictures of objects was a nice touch too. Great job!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Inspiration | #19 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
| Vibes | #35 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
| Overall | #37 | 3.222 | 3.222 |
| Usability | #42 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I really like the introduction, that could be straight up Dark Souls 4 which I love! The gritty tone in the art is cool, I just wish there was a bit of 8-bit influence throughout to dial in on the retro vibes. With a bit of formatting for the room descriptions this could be an absolutely amazing supplement. Great work this is awesome!
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Cairn ClimberI really like the tones and vibes from this one. I like how you kept everything tight to your vision.
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Megatroid BrosI'd look at your labeling of the maps vs their description, they seem to be off. I figured it out from the text, but was confused for a bit trying to figure out what they meant because I think it was supposed to be associated with the Overland Hex Map, which would make sense. And some do match, but others it's not clear where they would be. I will say I do love the image on pg 13, that's a nice mash up of images.
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