I really like the cover art! That's one freaky crab. The maps are easy to read and I like your traps.  The light bridge challenge with the hint was cool!

nice work! A really solid and well fleshed out adventure. Great work on the monsters too. My eyes would appreciate a larger font size, but I understand you wanted to get as much content in as possible :)

This seems like a very fun adventure! The crab knights are pretty cool.

I have one critique, but before I offer it, I want to acknowledge that maybe I'm a little over-sensitive because I'm a PhD candidate and my dissertation research analyzes both monks and Indian religion. Kali is a goddess for millions of real world human beings today. The movie Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom handled that aspect of its story less than ideally. When I saw your otherwise neat adventure mention Kali, it was jarring. I think the text here largely does a good job avoiding the ways that Temple of Doom dehumanizes people by painting their religion as monstrous and inscrutable, but there were still little things that made me wince. For example, I know it's pedantic, but there's nothing in Hinduism that's exactly analogous to the dead "monks" that litter the dungeon. That was just one of several points in the adventure where I wondered why you wouldn't just make up a different god or goddess of "destruction, time, and transformation", or use one of the ones from Shadowdark. Some of my closest and most avid TTRPG playing friends have South Asian heritage, and I wouldn't want to run this adventure at the table for them without changing it. I easily could change the name from Kali to something else, it's just frustrating that the default either requires that work or at best draws eye-rolls and at worst potentially excludes people I respect and value. 

I hope that's not too harsh, and to be clear, I'm not accusing anyone of anything (except maybe Stephen Spielberg and George Lucas of lazy sensationalizing). Maybe it's not my place to say here, because I'm white, but it bugs me when people use figures from my cultural-religious background in off-piste ways. I'd want knowledgeable sources to say something if they saw that happening, and I'm trying to follow the golden rule. 

I know nuance can get lost in online comments so I've tried to be careful and precise with what I want to point out, which is simply that IN MY OPINION, this adventure's temple should not be dedicated to Kali.

Let me know if you want me to clarify or explain anything about this comment, and let me reiterate, it's a fun dungeon that I think would be a hoot to run if it weren't for that one issue.