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A jam submission

Moving OnView game page

Pouring drinks on a train never felt so stressful.
Submitted by Malou, shane_slaughter, jmiceo, IAmBeardPerson — 9 hours, 6 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall#54.1524.152
Innovation#174.2474.247
Visuals#204.5934.593
Gameplay#244.0254.025
Enjoyment#264.1604.160
Theme#534.1984.198
Audio#1143.6913.691

Ranked from 81 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does the game fit the theme?
You travel through strange conversations in a strange train in stranger worlds.

What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
All environments and characters are build from scratch. Small items such as foliage, certain textures and sounds were used from open source libraries (such as quixel and freesound.org).

How many people worked on the game?
4

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Submitted(+2)

I have never wanted to get out of a train so bad. This game sells the atmosphere amazingly well with some serious vibes. AND on top of that it's ridiculously well written, with quirky camera shots, and the visuals are just perfect for this non-space over here. What an absolute gem in this little jam! AMAZING game.

Submitted(+1)

I loved this a lot! I am so bad at puring drinks lol

The atmosphere is sublime

Submitted(+1)

This game are amazing and soo beautiful

Submitted(+1)

I am a passenger now lol. great game, I love the aesthetic. The champagne section was so hard i might've flooded the train. great mechanic!

Developer(+1)

Hahaha wow this is really impressive. It's kinda wild to see how a character controller that can theoretically only move on the z axis is still able to move on other axis :))

I want to congratulate you on finding this great bug haha

Submitted(+1)

Amazinggggggggg

Submitted(+2)

I really enjoyed the vibe, the visuals and the dialogues, it all makes a very cool atmosphere. Loved how the passengers and carriages change abruptly after a dialogue, very unsettling and cool idea. It is very very polished!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Oh and one suggestion as we had the same issue with our game! You can remove the Unity bar with the title and full screen button when building, chosing the "Minimal" WEBGL Template! Or let me know if it's there by choice, I am very new with all this so there might be a reason I'm not getting :)

Submitted(+1)

actually goated rated 5/5 every cat 10/10 game!

Submitted(+2)

Great mechanic amazing atmospherere!

Submitted

If I run to the end of the train (no E Talk) -> cart disappear/clamp behind door.


Bug:

2nd train I waited a little & my hand twisted by 270 degrees. I couldn't pour drinks into pot,

1 ... locked from next door

2 ... twisted physics 

3 ... 3 tries -> waited 2mins for hand to do 360 to be able to pour juice in pot again


Visual bug of Juice Disappear


Hand stays twisted after customer CANCEL action pour drink


Sound

I hear sound reload noise -> maybe blend multiple sound at same time, or some 2nd sound -> to blend this pop

Voice acting / Fake sentences would do great


Aesthetics

Love aesthetics it fits together well,

only outside is repetitive too much (I found pattern)

good shader effect to twist


Gameplay Problems:

1 ... Unable to move between car -> if I do not want to pour drinks

2 ... Locked action pour drink -> unusableto cancel when my hand is rotated 270 degree until customers gets angry

3 ... after some repetitions (not following any script) -> feels like my decisions are scripted

(if you follow script & succeed then very good -> if you try things random/your way it feels scripted)

Developer(+1)

Hey thank you for your detailed review:
You can rotate the hand with Q and E to keep it upright, this not a bug but a feature! If your glass rotates too much it will empty.

I agree that voice acting would add to the atmosphere of the game. 

As of now the game as it is, IS scripted. it's mostly on rails to tell a story. If we were to expand on it we would definitely add more choice to it. But for this jam we did not have time to pack in more content/decision based content.

Thanks for playing and leaving such a detailed review!

Submitted(+2)

I loved it. The vibe is great the mini game becomes hard and frustrating in a good way. It's also hilarious that the ppl react to how badly i fuck up. The narration is cool and the camera work during the dialogue is cool too!

Submitted(+2)

Really cool art-house–style game! I’m just glad the beer bottle seemed to hold about 10 gallons. I probably spilled at least eight trying to hit the glass 😄

Submitted(+1)

Incredible jam game, the art direction, the gameplay its all really well done, and those "cutscenes," it's all so good. Personally I'd leave it here, maybe aside from some polish, this game doesn't need to become anything "more", it's amazing as is.


9.5/10 :D

Submitted(+1)

Super engaging game, really cool concept. The graphics are really nice and suit the whole atmosphere really well, same with the text and camera movement, and it was cool to see the environment change when moving to another train cart. The gameplay of pouring a drink into the glass is simple yet challenging and fun, and I really loved the dialogue of the guy telling you the controls 😆. This game was an entire experience, really well done!

Submitted(+1)

Really like the graphics and the camera control

Submitted(+3)

Hi

I liked the panning sound as you turned to the customers.

Passengers had some deep stories in their hearts; you never know what the other is dealing with.

The balancing mechanic was fun.


A thought: could there be a different type of glasses for different drinks  ? a champagne glass, a beer glass. 

Otherwise, very cool, good jam game.

Thank you

Developer(+2)

In a second release we ideally would have you be able to pick up drinks, pour in different glasses, add ice or lemon etc! But due to time constrains we opted for a pretty simple mechanism for now, since it was already a challenge and a half lol

Submitted

For sure. Good job.

Submitted(+1)

Great game! The graphics and the dialogues are great! But my favorite part was surely the camera work, it felt so artistic

Submitted(+1)

I love the graphics and idea. Very creative :)

Submitted(+1)

loved the 3d and the graphics.

Submitted(+1)

Momma might have been an alcoholic the way I was pouring that drink

Submitted(+1)

I love the artwork of this game. I felt a bit bad spilling drinks all over customers as they poured their hearts out to me...

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