Interesting premise and location. The layout isn't great, though. I found the monotype font with random paragraph breaks hard to read. I am unfamiliar with CBR+PNK, but I assume the clocks/tracks are an important asset. However, I found them a bit distracting. Better layout might help. One small nitpick: having robots (which can be hacked) transfer data between air-gapped systems is somewhat self-defeating.

It’s been awhile since my last CBR game, but reading this gave me a sense of solidity, the mission feels grounded, dependable, with clear events and trackers that made me understand it quickly.

That said, my reading experience was occasionally interrupted by typos, missing punctuation and some awkward line breaks that pulled me out of the flow and made the text harder to follow than it needed to be.