I liked the sticker/icons that popped up on different papers! Fun game, thanks!!

This was great, especially for your first time! Its also nice to see another Dialogic user :)

HaHa--never thought I'd enjoy doing my job as a game! I only got to 97% though, and that irks me. lol. 

i like the interpretation of theme - instead of being in a strange place, you are proof-reading strange essays with strange spelling mistakes. i also like the pixel art and the icons that popup which emphasise the theme (i assume its hallucinations-). overall, really nice concept that has a lot of potential!

Cute game! And funny! I don't think picking out spelling mistakes is inherently fun, so adding the pixel art and timer to give it more interest was a great idea. I wonder if a more tactile player action would add to the fun? (like circling or underlining the words with a nice big red pen instead of simply clicking).  

Love the pixel art (the teacher and the little sprites)! I was confused at first by the Eiffel Tower which shows up first - I thought it was an "A", as if it were the grade for the paper. But became immediately clear when the next paper showed up.

For future projects, spending some time on customising the button / UI themes instead of using the default adds an extra layer of polish (but I get it's also the type of thing that one can run out of time for in the end.)

Overall really charming game, nice work!  

Nice little game. The idea is funny and there is some polish. Great job for a week !

I really like the timer running down but i wish that it would jump back up a little bit if you did well on one. Well maybe it does i didn't notice if it did or not it just felt like it didn't. Gave me typing of the dead energy!

sumtimmes when i ptype reviews i hae a lot of spellinhg errs. thjios game was rite up mi alllye ann i njooy it a nugbh. i will be shring this game with a few of my frennz and poeple hoo like inglish und wen too skool four itt. 

Loved the game, gratz on your first game jam. Keep up the work

Nicely polished and easy to understand! Also I enjoyed the setting and the audio fit in nicely! A small potential improvement (from my perspective, of course!) would be to include some more detail about the final score. Did the percentage include papers I hadn't completed yet? How many papers did I get of the total? That would help me understand how well I did a bit more.

Overall a really solid entry--great job!

Very cool game, I liked the pixel art and how pops up over the page you're reading. It's a very short and solid experience, great work!

Cool game!
is this an ADHD simulator? getting so distracted from the chmimken nugies you can't even read the text anymore xD

A pretty cool game, especially for a first time. Altough im not sure how it relates to the theme. Either way feedback wise I'd try to focus on player feel and graphics improvements. You have lots to learn, but this is a really solid start.

6.5/10 :)

Overall, fun unique concept for your first game! The art was very fun and the vibe in general felt really stylized and a small thing, but I loved the planets haha. 

It seems like the UI is smaller than intended? I think my biggest issue was this pretty much. It was a bit hard to read. It was kinda good for grading the student's papers since I didn't have to move my mouse much but everything felt a little small. 

It also may have been nice to add a bit more information at the end like how many student's papers I graded so that instead of just the accuracy so that I could know how fast I went or try and beat my record from last time. 

Great work on your first game jam game! I had fun playing the game and also really enjoyed the little sprites/drawings of the topic I was reading about pop up. Some more feedback while playing would be a good addition, e.g. a SFX when you select a spelling mistake

Nice, unique idea for a first jam. I had fun reading through the essays and spotting the mistakes. Some of the stuff the kids wrote genuinely made me laugh. “They would eat the gold!?” lol. That kind of humor really carried it.

I also liked the addition of the little sprites related to the topic, interfering with your proofreading. It added some pressure and kept it from just being static text on a screen.

Creative concept and well executed for a first jam. Nice job!

Great idea!

Cool game fr, the sprites related to the paper appearing gradually is a nice detail to add some difficulty to it, peakest 👀

Fun game with a creative central idea!  I enjoyed the little sprites that showed up when I clicked on the mispellings.  Equal parts adorable and challenging when they start covering the paper.  Nice job!

Felt a bit like I was at work. Cute idea nicely done though, but not relaxing enough for me.

I enjoyed playing this game. It was fun. Reminds me of Bully from Rockstar.