Love the layout, what software did you use? I concur with a lot of the others here that it hints at a lot going on but on its own is a little sparse of content. I think more options and more fleshed out option for each section would go a long way, the skeleton here is really good though.

This seems more like a framework for building your own mission, rather than a table-ready mission, as is. That said, I do like it for what it is, and i dig the layout styling. However, I think it is begging to get another page. Either lean into the "mission generator framework" angle with more examples, and rollable tables for clients, complications, scores, etc., or focus in one one set of options to flesh out the characters and challenges a bit.

Oh, and also, I adore the way you frame these ancient data centers. Makes it almost feel less like a typical heist thing and more like an Indiana Jones-esque adventure archeology thing. I think that's the core conceptual nugget that I really would've loved to see explored more.

This appears to be a mission built on the Blades in the Dark ruleset, reimagined for a cyberpunk setting. The approach has potential, but it does not come across as system-agnostic, IMHO. Presenting it explicitly as a micro-hack of Blades in the Dark might strengthen its identity.

The writing is clear and accessible, but too "broad" for my style. It makes the scenario feel somewhat generic and harder to ground in cyberpunk genre.

I really like the setup and the way how this adventure develops the "ancient" data facility into a maze. I have never used this Score type cards before. It seems to be an easy way of how to set up an adventure seed with crucial mission information, hook and even complications along the way... I am missing a bit the meat of the adventure - which is still understandable, as this suggests just the framework, not the individual locations or encounters - adding those or maybe just a random generator of those, would push this to another level and take another workload from GM's shoulders. ;)