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Pajamaverse: Stupid Horny Apartments's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Horny | #26 | 3.540 | 3.895 |
| Narrative | #34 | 2.918 | 3.211 |
| Kink | #40 | 2.727 | 3.000 |
| Aesthetic | #43 | 3.014 | 3.316 |
| Ambition | #44 | 2.775 | 3.053 |
| Play | #45 | 2.535 | 2.789 |
| Stealth | #47 | 1.770 | 1.947 |
| Sound | #53 | 1.292 | 1.421 |
| Novelty | #53 | 2.487 | 2.737 |
| Overall | #53 | 2.550 | 2.805 |
| Harmony | #56 | 2.440 | 2.684 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Quite a cute, little visual novel. Of course all the characters are parodies, but I'm fine with that. The drawings were cartoonishly adorabe.
I like the concept, although I found the "game" to be terribly easy. I managed to unlock every room. The trash mechanic is not really used here, so I don't know why it's there at all. I expect it'll be relevant in a future version of the game.
Regardless, I really liked what I saw. The sex scenes were quite well written and engaging, and I loved the way you aproached them. I hope to see more of this project!
ALSO, ONE TINY DETAIL: I originally played this on a Firefox browser and the graphics for the buttons to go anywhere were very, very spotty and unreliable. Only after updating everything in the game I decided to try from Chrome, and on that browser everything works just great. This is not your fault; most likely Firefox's latest updates that have broken several things regarding in-browser games.
I should suggest, however, that you also allow players to download a desktop version of the game. It'd be a nice option to have.
I actually really really liked your sex scene method/layout, i found myself very compelled by the polaroid eyecatches and the animation changes going in time with the script, great work on those!
Interesting! There's a lot of gameplay systems in this one already, more than you usually see in Ren'Py projects. That's promising, given it's just a demo.
A dollhouse sprite-focused view of the sex scenes with photo closeups is one of my absolute favorites! Your cartoony parody art is lovely. The writing is pleasantly silly, but feels a bit long for that lighthearted tone sometimes. I hope you'll keep working on this game, it could becoming very catchy if you add more tenants and different ways to interact with them!
I couldn’t get this to run through the itch.io app for some reason, but the webpage lets it play just fine at least. I wasn’t quite sure where to click in order to progress the gameplay parts of the story, though, or how to actually make money in order to do repairs (being on the “collect money” screen it never actually automatically filled up with any coins), and when I tried going to the bar I got a ren’py exception screen.
From what does work I get the impression that this is sort of an idle/clicker game, and implementing that in ren’py is an interesting (and ambitious) idea!
instead of completing loading, for some reason I get the error:
Downloading game data...
Could not download game.zip: Error in input stream
More information may be available in the browser console or contained in the log.
the log hasn't been much help though, it just says
Failed to load ‘https://html-classic.itch.zone/html/16482746/game.zip’. A ServiceWorker intercepted the request and encountered an unexpected error.
i don't know what it could be
Some fun dialogue in this game.
loving the character art as well.
Nice casting and art with a simple and straightforward game loop that would be easy to add content to later, the potential is quite visible. I enjoyed the income speed, it didn't leave me waiting without anything to do.
However, I disliked the writing. It was tedious and repetitive while using a lot of hentai and netizen vocabulary (NTR, v-card, butt fiend etc) and almost never describing things by their name (I cheered the first time I read "ass" instead of tunnel or wall or backdoor and the rest, it was with Marcy I think).
Most tenants having wives or girlfriend or sisters and especially the first saying that she doesn't normally like boys felt like lesbian fetichisation but not in a way I could appreciate, especially with sex being a sequence of gift leading to instant desire, kissing followed by penetration, cumming, and brutal end (for the one exception where you eat her up before penetration, the text graciously informs you that the "real fun" is about to start when you switch to PIV, which I really disliked: it was dismissive of oral sex and contrasted poorly with the blowjob scene that is considered to be a valid, entire sequence).
Overall I think this needs more variety in the writing and a bigger effort to convey sex as something experiential and varied rather than a series of awkward uses of the words sticky and lust. I'd recommend reading erotica (and not porn) to get a wider perspective of what you could write, because the will is clearly there to do a variety of things: this is a game with plenty of content and with nice sprites that conveyed the sizes, positions and action shots very well, I believe it mostly needs sexier sex.
I like the premise of this one a lot, and the characters are all very charming (Marcy is my favorite lol). I think the game might be a little too easy, though? You gain money really fast, and as soon as you unlock new characters your first interaction with them is always a full on sex scene. I know it's just my personal preference, but I like when there's more build up towards the sex scenes. Makes them really feel like rewards.
.....The cheese jokes XD
I had a few issues with the buttons in the hall being unresponsive (I think another commenter had the same problem!) The game wanst entirely my vibe, but was still enjoyable :)
Also your art style really stands out, its a breath of fresh air with all the pseudo-anime games out there! :) <3.
Oh! Btw the web version works fine on android despite the incompatible device warning! :)
when the error message comes up about dissovle, i wonder if your engine has some way you can flag that text to be selectable so people can paste the reports, might save you a step in future feedback :)
the 'go to bar' is not implemented yet. was missed in early testing.
renpy usually catches the 'dissovle/dissolve' issue but sometimes misses it. will be fixed in next update.
A charming base foundation for a porn parody visual novel. While the character designs and scenario are far from my cup of tea, I did find some of the humor amusing, and the graphics had their own earnesty and charm that I appreciated despite being outside its target audience. Some clickables seemed unreactive and touchy, especially in the apt hallway, though im not sure if thats just due to renpy web version or what.
thanks. The touchy buttons are partly because of the webuild, partially because i was trying out camp pinewood's method of buttons, turns out it was missing something that has been resolved in newer games. Basically something to do with transparency levels on an image I believe.
An okay visual novel that could do with a bit more time in the oven. The writing is good, but the sex scenes feel a little bit drawn out with repetitive dialogue. The art style is different, quite round and bubbly. One bug I did find is that if you choose "Go to the bar" after sleeping, the game encounters an error because it can't find "dissovle", I assume this is due to a typo of "dissolve", so that may need to be fixed.
the 'go to bar' is not implemented yet. was missed in early testing. Glad you enjoyed the art XD