oh wow, I've never really experienced mech stories before, but heck, I feel like it made me a fan with this one!  That was a heck of a cool style to tell a story as well, you did great, I would love to see more some day!

damn.  short but punchy.  i am not especially Into giant robots but you got me rooting for this one real fast

The intense audio and filter do a lot of work in setting the right tone! I always enjoy this style of short but impactful text in stories. It all ends quite abruptly, but as an intro to a larger narrative in the future, it starts off very strong!

That was an intense experience. I got rather invested into the narrative being set up. The emotional tension coming from the mech was really felt. Especially when the character was being punished for failure to preform. Look forward to seeing it all fleshed out.

An intriguing bit of world building, where you’re really made to feel for the main character. A bit more contrast with the background would have been nice, and I’m unsure where the horny would have come in with such little demo to go off. A nice starting point for the future, should you choose to continue it!

A bit short for a demo, but I like where the story is going so far, and I like the idea of being the mech instead of the pilot. As someone else said, a bit more contrast with the background would make the text easier on the eyes. The writing is solid, though it doesn't deliver much in terms of 'horny'. Still, good job regardless :)

Loved the aesthetics. I just want to see a little more of the story

I really enjoyed this perspective more than I thought I would! As a fan of the genre, I'm super into imagining the experience of being the hound. I hadn't thought of the perspective of the shell. The writing is excellent, subtly provocative and horny without being direct or explicit. I absolutely adored playing it <3

I was edged, wanting to act/interact until the end and never allowed to... which was kind of the point. Gripping writing, with a beginning that leans into suggestive wording before leaving the horny at the door.
Characters are marked as trans mech and pilot but nothing supports it. Maybe the trapped allegory? Either way, great vignette, def would like more.

I played it multiple times seeking if I could have done something.
The hook is in there since I wanted to intervenie.
Adding some form of interaction I think you can cook with this plot.