Such a beautiful layout! I can totally picture Godrin shuffling from establishment to establishment trying to pay in prose!

Perfect layout!  Very punky!  :)

The graphic design is really top-notch, but so are the characters you’ve written. The shop owner that dreams of love, and the sweet-making ape that will almost certainly be adopted by the party!

I think the art is gorgeous and the strong sensory descriptions really spot-on. In its semplicity (meaning it is just a location), I really liked it.