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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Uniqueness | #24 | 2.622 | 2.714 |
| Correlation to Theme | #24 | 2.691 | 2.786 |
| Composition | #26 | 2.346 | 2.429 |
| Execution | #27 | 2.208 | 2.286 |
| Listenability | #27 | 2.484 | 2.571 |
| Innovation | #27 | 1.863 | 1.929 |
| Overall | #27 | 2.369 | 2.452 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
Scenes one and 2 of the factory in the mountain
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Comments
I would definitely put some reverb on the piano and find a cooler sounding virtual piano (like temperature cool).
It's a nice little composition you've made regardless, great work! :)
very, very lonely, first scene really sounds like wandering around alone, in like an abandoned building of some kind, which I'd say is pretty accurate to the first scene haha, second scene, very alien, decrepit, tense, it sounds kind of like I'm reaching out for something I don't understand, but I can't quite reach it.
I wouldn't say the mixing is the most pleasing, not that it hurts to listen to, but just that the space isn't very filled out, and the track feels a bit cramped, but to be honest, throughout listening to the whole thing, I was wondering if that was actually intentional or not? In fact, it's because the piano sounds so distant, and muffled, that I saw a person in the second scene being UNABLE to reach something! And to be honest, I'd say- in a weird way, the mixing works? because the piano itself sounds alone, and kinda uncomfortable? not sure, maybe I'm... reaching! GET IT!?!? -- I apologize
Overall, I love the track! It sounds super charming to me! Well done! :D
Downloading worked for me!
There is about 50 seconds of silence at the end of the audio file, which I guess is not on purpose.
The first part felt to me that the piano was bit alone and could've maybe used something more to fill the soundscape (or a fat reverb to make the piano fill more space), but the second part after that was really great, and I mean really great, absolutely loved the vibe it had and wish it had been longer. The slight vibrato on the voice/whistleish sound combined with the piano just gave a really nice "mysterious" feeling to me which I felt fit the traversal through the mysterious factory well.
The parts themselves feel a bit disconnected from each other, but I guess you intended them to be 2 different short tracks.
Good work!
Thank you for the comments and advices.
Thank you for the feedback ! I now made it public so that you can download it ! Tell me if you reached the page
Short info. Your submission page is empty. There is no external link for listening and the song isn't for download. Also the project page seems to be bugged and can't be opener. Might be a problem with some settings for the submitted project.