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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Uniqueness | #20 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
| Listenability | #20 | 2.875 | 2.875 |
| Execution | #21 | 2.750 | 2.750 |
| Innovation | #22 | 2.438 | 2.438 |
| Composition | #22 | 2.688 | 2.688 |
| Overall | #23 | 2.760 | 2.760 |
| Correlation to Theme | #25 | 2.688 | 2.688 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
it was supposed to be a critic to the ambient polution by the large factories and companies
but i didnt do the lyrics
How did you Innovate? (Complete later if you need to submit on time)
i think that the start was a little difeferent than the normal
DAW Screenshot - Demonstrate that this is your own work
i alredy put it at the page
Discord Tag
bungas_47140
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Not bad. I really like that beat you got here. And those hits. so good. The only thing was it was a bit long lol. Really solid submission here.
ok. so. i liked this a lot and if you rated it bad because of the intro you should go back and give this another chance. BUT.
your intro is grating and not in the good way. up til 0:26 this song is fuckin unlistenable. you could cut that down by like 2/3s and still get the same effect and you could get rid of it 100% and have a damn good song. maybe grab a sample quote from some asshole talkin about how greed is good or somethin instead.
i stuck with it and im glad i did because AFTER THAT its not bad. your bassline is sick af and i like the drum fills youve got goin on. i like the shit you have goin on with the synth and the drums at the 2:00 mark.
the guitar shit yr doin at 2:18 is very persona 3 and i like it a lot. same with the synths at like 2:45. idk what it is about it it just has persona vibes to me.
i can tell this was supposed to have lyrics - your lead is definitely missing. if you want to keep workin on this, put the lyrics in there, and seriously man get rid of that intro.
i know that i could make better in some parts, im beggining on music production/composing and im trying to get better each day, thx fot the review.