This was a very nice read! It reminds a lot of a poem, though I really liked the fact that you did not rhyme everything but let the melody of the words and sentences dictate the rhythm of the text. It felt very fluent and coherent, also in combination with the topic :D
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The Court of The Naked Eye's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Artistic merit | #2 | 4.249 | 4.750 |
| Overall | #3 | 3.913 | 4.375 |
| Entertainment value | #5 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Regrets hold people down, come to the court of the naked eye. Let a silken maiden ease the burden with a truthful lie.


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