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A jam submission

The Court of The Naked EyeView project page

Can you see them through their masks?
Submitted by EvPacho — 1 day, 2 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Artistic merit#24.2494.750
Overall#33.9134.375
Entertainment value#53.5784.000

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Word count
456

Blurb
Regrets hold people down, come to the court of the naked eye. Let a silken maiden ease the burden with a truthful lie.

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Comments

Submitted

This was a very nice read! It reminds a lot of a poem, though I really liked the fact that you did not rhyme everything but let the melody of the words and sentences dictate the rhythm of the text. It felt very fluent and coherent, also in combination with the topic :D

Submitted

It's diving deep into our personality. I really liked the questions, it made me think about how I look at people.

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Love how the first line of each paragraph is also treated like it's own little poem. Did they come first, and then you filled in the paragraph to the theme, or was it an after thought (or light bulb!) during editing to make it stand out more?

Developer (1 edit)

The first two felt fitting while writing the draft, since the text is constantly rhyming, I thought using the same line at the start would feel like the right pattern. Then about the 4th or 5th block I had the ligthbulb moment to change the verb in the first line of the 1st and 2nd block and that retroactively helped me writing the other blocks and ended connecting the narrative between the work being done in the court and what the narrator thinks of it/the customers. Something like that.