This feels a bit different from the theme to me, but I honestly really enjoyed it. The melody has this light, floating feeling that made me happy while listening. It also reminded me of a Zelda track, though I can’t remember which one exactly. Really pleasant piece overall :) 

I gotta start with the obvious : as other pointed out, this track barely relates to the theme of the jam.

However I have to praise the creative (and good-sounding) orchestration, the track sounds full and fun, it sounds dynamic, maybe a bit too stiff (the lack of nuance does make it sound amateur). For a beginner it's honestly impressive, I urge you to continue making music. Do make use of more nuance, and try to hum your melodies as you write them, it really helps them make more memorable.

Melody clarity 5/5

Melody impact 3/5

Composition 3/5 (the track is good, but there isn't much development, which is a point I consider important in a melody focused jam - not making just the melody but showing how you use it to tell a story)

Listenability 3/5

Correlation to theme 1/5

Feels a bit overtly happy and calm to really fit the Weapon Of Legend theme to me.

Melody feels nice, you could maybe have some little pauses in the phrases at parts since it kinda feels like on long sentence. The most natural way for feeling those spots is just trying to sing, hum, or whistle the melody and you probably will naturally feel the spots where to pause a bit while performing it yourself.

Arrangement/orchestration wise it would've been cool to have a more drastic change than just dropping the strings at  0:55,since rest of the accompaniment keeps playing the same it doesn't really feel a big of a shift, having the other accompaniment parts change too would've made the change to the calmer part feel more powerful.

Just my subjective feels, but still good stuff!

Very Nice & Peaceful! I really like it. TBH, I think you're better than me.. Great song!

Very nice piece for sure, but don't really hear it fitting the theme much at all. Nice work.

Como vou competir com isso, mano 😭?

When I close my eyes and listen to this song it's like I'm flying in a beautiful landscape, and then I get to a hidden forest meadow, with sparkling fireflies, butterflies, fairies and the hidden sword in a pedestal (similar to A Link to the Past, but more gentle and inviting). Amazing song.

Amazing work