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A jam submission

OverwrittenView game page

Submitted by synathakkar — 3 hours, 8 minutes before the deadline
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Oooooh what a nice game. Love the whole concept of 'rewriting' your story. I could feel the character's frustration when she didn't speak up and I felt so satisfied when I was overwriting my choices. A short game and it packs a punch. Great game!!

Submitted

Loved it. Great story.. relatable. 

Liked the concept of editing those tiny tiring moments of the day. 

A nice visual novel style game. The concept implementation is lovely. It really had me going like, "Why are all the choices wrong? Do I get no options to speak up?" And then the rewrite thing came in and it was so cool!

I've still got more games to go through, but if I were judging (I'm not unfortunately), this would be a winning contender.

If I am to nitpick nonetheless, I'll say when the aunty says to change clothes, and I select to "go in and put on a jacket", I was expecting to see the character with a jacket on top going forward.

Developer

Thank you very much for your feedback!

About the jacket thing, i wanted to add sprites but end moment i forgot to do so... mb:(