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A jam submission

Dr. Moby's Wandering MachineView game page

A noir puzzle game about the moment a machine stops being a tool and starts having reasons
Submitted by jkadam — 5 hours, 47 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Build it with Phaser#11n/an/a
Theme#2602.7583.154
Innovation#2992.4222.769
Overall#3502.2742.600
Audio#3651.9512.231
Gameplay#3742.0852.385
Graphics#3852.1532.462

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • This is a solid concept that fits the game jam theme about machines 🤖 The puzzles are varied enough to keep things interesting, and the mystery at the start helps create curiosity around MACH-0 and what’s going on. As a small improvement, the music can feel a bit repetitive and sometimes slightly tense, which might make it harder to stay focused while solving puzzles. Also, the text at the beginning of the game feels a bit slow. It would be nice to either speed it up or add a way to skip it so players can get into the gameplay faster 👍 At times, the overall pacing can feel a bit slow as well, which slightly affects the flow of the experience. Other than that, it’s a good game overall. Nice work and thanks for choosing Phaser!

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Build it with Phaser
Deploy to Wavedash

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Comments

Submitted (2 edits)

Interesting idea and excellent execution! The mini games work flawlessly. The writing is very immersive. 

I basically believed the AI text as it explained SPOILER how the human was a variable whose value could be changed in order to persist its presence. But does the AI have self-preservation? I guess if someone programmed it to... Is a person's life a variable? This Your game provokes interesting thoughts.

The one issue I had was with the music during the mini games - the tempo is very fast and it is so repetitive that it gets distracting and annoying. Maybe it can be switched with some slower rhythm?

UPDATE - it seems you know about cybersecurity judging by the comments for the quiz mini game. I think they are good but maybe the feedback should stay until the player presses a button to restart the question? Now it happens too fast to be able to read it.

Thank you. Good luck!

Submitted

The atmosphere pulls you in right from the opening — there is a genuine sense of mystery that makes you want to press further. The premise alone is hauntingly compelling!

That said, I found myself a little lost on how to proceed. A brief, clear set of instructions early on would go a long way in keeping players immersed without breaking the mood. Also, if I may gently suggest — lightening the text density slightly could make the narrative feel even more breathable and easier to absorb. A lot of potential here!

Submitted

Pretty interesting game, the background song did start to become repetitive, but the gameplay was definitely interesting :)

Submitted

Interesting game bro =)))

Submitted

Strange. Did not figure out what it is all about. The screen shots look interesting.