There are some interesting ideas in this track. I like the tense feeling at the beginning, and the instrumentation gives the piece a heroic feel. The melody keeps evolving throughout the track, which gives it a dynamic and unpredictable quality. Overall, it’s an enjoyable listen :)

I like the way you emulated the forge with these metallic thumps!

The track overall seems to be lacking development and melody impact. There is nuance, but tuba and horn definitely aren't enough to fill the space. Your melody is clear, but isn't memorable due to its length and verbosity, and lacks a clear direction. My advice is that you use of repetition, have a simple motif you build your song on and introduce variations for development.

Melody clarity 4/5

Melody impact 2/5

Composition 1/5

Listenability 1/5

Correlation to theme 3/5

For the melody, having all the notes be connected without any pauses to breathe is probably not going to make any brass player happy to have to play it 😄 I think that's part of the reason the melody felt a bit monotone to emirhando404.

But still the feel is nice, maybe with a larger arrangement it could feel even more powerful.

Good work!

Very interesting! The Bass kind of reminds me of a Minecraft Song, but I don't know the name of it.. Still a pretty enjoyable track!

I like it! It has a clear and neat melody and the instruments you used are also pretty fitting for the theme. However, I think it is a bit monotone if that makes sense? Maybe thats just me... It also could've been more epic/broader imo. Still pretty heroic though.
And something pretty subjective: I didn't like the up-and-down xylophone (I think?) in the beginning, sounds a bit goofy to me.
All in all pretty nice though!

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