In chapter 1 in human resources there's mistake where you wrote "fo" instead of "of"
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I don't think that it's strictly necessary, but I believe that adding 'that' after "media" improves the sentence. Although I do think that it's up to personal writing style. To me, when I first read the sentence it kind of felt off, like something was missing. I have read the sentence a couple of times over, and it's not necessary but I'll point it out nonetheless.